When I walk out to the amazing play ground I feel the fresh air push
against my face. The wet dirt makes a smelly smell. I see Gus running from an
imaginary ice monster. I see the mist as thick as a blanket. I feel the cold
metal under my hands as I swing across the bars. The bell bird sings me a happy
tune. Everybody talks as they play happily. The playground makes me very happy.
By Alec
As I run to the awesome
tremendous playground I feel the slide rubbing against my skin and the tough strong rope as
I swing. I feel the nice and warm timber and my foot scraping against the bark.The
first thing I hear is the bark scrunching and the loud fast flying fox going
back and forward. You can see steam from my cold breath. I can smell wet brown
bark and I feel the cloudy windy air. That’s why love the fantastic playground.
By Gus
As I run to get my hot dog I pause and smell the delicious smell. I
can see the coldness of the fog coming out of my mouth. As I walk to the Hardwick
Room I can hear my sister playing the noisy drums. As I climb on the tall tower
I can hear the beautiful Bell Birds singing. I can feel the yucky squishy bark
under my feet. I love the playground!
By Gala
When I run to the amazing
playground I can see a speedy flying fox and misty fog over the trees. I can
feel a bumpy, rough, tough tree under my hands and bumpy soggy wood. I can hear
birds singing, tapping on the concrete, instruments and people laughing. I can
smell cold air and sizzling hot dogs. I am amazed that we have a outstanding
playground. by Ollie
As I walk outside to the playground I smell stinky, disgusting shoes
stamping on the playground, the kids delicious food on the side of the
playground and the cold fresh air.
Then I see misty annoying fog, bird poo on the seats and the kids
playing. Next I hear loud drums from the classroom, kids screaming so loud and
loud rumbling of the cars passing me. After that I finally feel the cold wind
in my face, hard bumpy rope, the cold smooth metal and hard wet wood of the
tower. I think my playground is really cool!
By Caitlyn.
As I hurry to
the awesome playground I smell fresh air that makes me run and smile. The
smelly dirt catches my nose and makes me say “Yuck!!!” I can smell lots and lots of metal. When I
start to play with my friends I see people having fun and laughing. When I am
about to get tagged I see brown, sharp bark under my feet. I will also see my
cousin Joey, he’s a seagull. Finally I tag someone and the sun is in my eyes
but I try not to look at that. Then I hear birds singing lovely songs and the
bushes rustling. After I hear the birds and the bushes, two teachers walk past
and I can hear their boots clinking and clacking. When I bump into a metal pole
it is cold and hard. Then I stroke a tree and it feels like my cats scratching
me. The play ground is awesome.
By
Benji
When I walked to
the playground the first thing I feel Is the nice cold breeze blowing on me. I
feel the lumpy bumpy bark under my shoes. I feel the cold hard metal under my
hands. I hear the loud seagulls squawking all around me. I hear happy, playful
people laughing. I hear my hand squeaking on the cold hard round monkey bars. I
smell the hot yummy hot dogs sizzling on the barbeque. I smell the squishy soft
brown mud on the ground. I see lots of happy kids playing. I see the awesome
playground. I see the big long hard trees. I feel happy that we have an awesome
playground.
By Dylan
When I walk out to the playground
I can smell the cold, moist air and the very wet wood. I can also see the thick
fog and the cold, wet metal. It is slippery. I can hear a quiet chirping Bell
Bird in the tree. There is also loud, booming drums in the distance. I can feel
the crunchy bark under my feet and the bumpy tree under my fingers. I can smell
the hot sausages on the BBQ. I can see the skilfully made spider webs that
cling on to the bars tightly. I feel really excited that we have such an
awesome playground.
By Josh
As I walk onto the playground
following my friends suddenly I can feel the dampness of the bark, the bitter breeze, the cold metal pole
waiting to be used, the hard, light, soft, damp, wood, the rope tying onto my
fingers and the wet grass under my feet. I can smell the freshness of the air, the
rain dripping on the school grounds, the freshly mowed lawn and the sausages
sizzling. In the distance I can see kids laughing having fun playing on the
playground, the teachers talking and kids swinging from object to object. I can
also see the birds whistling in the trees, I can see the extra huge tower with
students hanging from it, the educational classrooms with teachers working in
them and the silent flowers swinging in the distance. I would not like to hear
the bell ring after lunch only at home-time. I can hear the rain dripping on my
head as I glide through the wind. The soft laughing from children above, the
squeals of delight and the shouting and screaming from playing tag ,is always the
sound you make. I love the playground ,field and courts.
By Gabby
As I run to the playground I can
hear the flying fox rumbling like rumble, rumble. I can feel the cold, hard
metal and the hard bark under my big shoes. When I walk to the huge tower I can
smell the fresh air around me, then I can smell the very stinky bark under my
shoes. I can see the awesome playground In front of me and children running
everywhere. That’s why I like the playground
By Fletch!!
As I walk
towards the incredible playground I can smell a very stinky worm farm and the
yummy, delightful hotdogs cooking. As I walk closer to the playground I hear
Bellbirds singing very sweetly and the beat of drums making incredible noise.
Also I can hear people whistling very softly. When I’m at the playground I see
old wrappers, rubbish that is dirty and I see pretty birds flying high in the
blue sky. I see lots of people playing games and the blue pool with lots of ducks
swimming around. I can feel super stiff rope sliding as I touch it. I feel very
slippery rubber. I feel happy because we have awesome playgrounds.
By GENEVIEVE!!!
As I walk
outside I can’t wait to go and play on the playground , the first the first
thing I see are the teachers walking slowly to the staffroom and chatting to each
other. As I climb on the bitterly cold metal ladder I can see the
boy’s playing rugby on the field they score a goal and yell “Goal”. Just then a
salty breeze comes wafting in and brings with it a wet and airy smell from the
wood. I wait for my friends and try and busy myself. I go to play on the monkey
bars, my hands sting softly like rain is falling on them. I jump down and go
and lean against a tree and I can feel the rough bark on my back. As I stand
there I can hear the wind rustling of the leaves. Do I want to stay here? I ask
no is the answer to that question, so I go and climb up the rope ladders .I can
feel the rope burn wrecking my hands. That’s better the cold wet dew is so nice
on my hands. Look there’s peter he’s taking down the red flag and the girls
trading stickers. Some people are playing tag, someone’s got tagged “Tag “they
say. I like our playground because it’s challenging and interesting and I like
the way that it has lots of high places that you can go if you want some peace
and quiet. I like our playground!
By Imogen
After I have finished my lunch I walk to the big, blue, awesome
playground. I can smell all the yummy things in people’s lunch boxes and
chlorine from the big blue swimming pool. I see lots of happy, joyful faces and
all the beautiful colours of the playground. I sometimes I hear lots of people
talking and laughing loudly and the mud squishing under my feet. My friends and
I feel the cold, wet, hard metal on our hands and the smooth, wet wood under my
feet. It makes me feel great that we have such a big, challenging playground at
our school.
By Tamsin
As I go to the playground the first thing I notice is I can smell
the rubber shoes and the lumpy bark. Then I can hear loud stomping. Next I hear
crashing waves. I can also hear Breda
whistling. I feel lumpy, bumpy bark and the smoothest metal ever. I can see
people screaming with laughter and I can hear the squawking seagulls and the
icy people.
By Charlie.M
As I walk out to the playground the first thing I notice is the
smell. I smell fresh smoky air, wet,
cold wood and hotdogs cooking. I can see
lumpy, bumpy trees, dirty rubbish, white fog and shiny red scooters. I can hear
loud drums banging away, the rumbling of my tummy, and loud stomping. I can
feel the wetness and the cool metal under my hands when I swing on the monkey-bars.
Then I can feel bumpy bark underneath my toes and the wet soggy playground I
feel happy about the playground.
By Poppy.
Great descriptions Room 13 - I feel like I was there with you!
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